Everything To Me (Complete) - Comments

  • FlawedAndFlawless

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    This story is fantastic! I love the plot and structure of the story. It's really good. But...I do have a bit of criticism. It'd be better if you were more detailed in your writing. It lacks details. Also, the plot is a bit cliche although wonderful!Other than that I love your writing.
    July 26th, 2011 at 02:01am
  • kaylababee143

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    Oh my fudge! I'm so mad about not getting emails that you updated! Or else I would have commented on every chapter! But as always your story was amazing but lacking some Evangeline! Lol anyway time to subscribe to the new story! **click**
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • Cassie Rosalee

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    Aww, i didn't want it to end. /: This is good though!
    July 9th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • Cassie Rosalee

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    HOLY CRAP!
    July 8th, 2011 at 07:11pm
  • octoberlover_1014

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    she dead.? realli ? update
    July 8th, 2011 at 06:55pm
  • dreamgirl13

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    Wait she's dead??!! She can't die!!
    July 8th, 2011 at 11:31am
  • Cassie Rosalee

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    ohh /: Man if someone stole my kids like that I'd seriously beat them to death once I found them forr realss (: BUT this was super good i just read the prequel and sequel today and i was like OMG this is so good and I kinda got hooked:D the sequel to this needs to come out too (:
    July 8th, 2011 at 02:24am
  • nicolecullen

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    Can't wait for the drama to come back :D please update soon
    July 7th, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • Cassie Rosalee

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    Thisis really good :) Update sooonn
    July 7th, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • kaylababee143

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    I love this story sooo sooo much! And I love tht I had some part in it! Post more soon pls!
    July 7th, 2011 at 09:01am
  • octoberlover_1014

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    i think you should have went to Carlisle’s! update !
    June 22nd, 2011 at 10:40pm
  • XoXHaysXoX

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    Love it!!! Update soon?
    June 22nd, 2011 at 06:28am
  • kaylababee143

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    Yayyyyy the baby's coming! Novalynn! And I can't wait for the drama! And yes yes I do think you should keep this going!
    June 22nd, 2011 at 05:26am
  • AlyssaDeeRhodes

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    I love this Story! Write more! Please? :)
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:03pm
  • tabbyluvsu

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    I love ur story
    June 8th, 2011 at 02:33pm
  • kaylababee143

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    Oh geez wht a bitch and I'm talking about Logan. Lol
    June 8th, 2011 at 02:42am
  • SimplyFaith

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    Haha thts funnii lol update soon!!
    June 8th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • Dani.Love.

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    Please hurry!!!!!
    June 6th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • XoXHaysXoX

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    The kids are technically both cousin and siblings. It is just like when your uncle marries your mom and your kids think he is grandpa or something. :D
    Well, Great update!
    June 5th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • nicolecullen

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    I love all the babies names. Please update soon.
    June 4th, 2011 at 09:48pm