I'll Be Seeing You Soon - Comments

  • Ballerina Girl

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    damn lover!!! i finally got to read it and DAMN! This was off the charts! Beautiful. Brilliant. Genius. Terrific. Out of this world. Downright the most G thing i've ever read lol. haha it was amazing =P there's not much more i can say cuz im left speechless......................good job buddy o'l pal of mine....hope to be seeing you soon!
    July 25th, 2010 at 06:26am
  • gemmaa

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    Such a tear jerker! Beautifully written. I loved it =)
    July 19th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • coast rider

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    This was so beautifully written. I almost cried.
    I think it expressed teenage love in a really great way that was very believable.
    It was very cute how Travis sang to her before he died and how he was willing to spend his last moments with Madison instead of his mom.
    July 18th, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    This was beautifully written. It conveyed the strong emotions of love without being cheesy.
    July 17th, 2010 at 05:23am
  • Rave on Spaceboy

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    You definately painted a very sad picture, and I really shouldn't have read this while listening to "Asleep" by The Smiths, because I nearly cried.
    I like this, I think you did a great job of conveying emotion :)
    July 16th, 2010 at 09:36am
  • Dasha.

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    I absolutely loved this. Honestly a tear jerker without a question.
    Though it has a sad ending it kinda of gives you re-inforcement even with death. It gives the hope that there's more to everything when life ends. That it's only a short chapter and there's more for us when we leave.

    The A7X lyrics fit perfectly with this one shot and it just so happens to be one of my favorite songs from them.
    July 16th, 2010 at 05:19am
  • forever sunshine

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    HA! travis and madison, i swear i couldve sworn i guessed you were gonna use those names!!
    it was sad, someone needs to see a psychologist!!! *cough*
    but, yes! literally brilliant.
    there's just no other was to put it.
    and the background! i will comment that as welll, BEAUTIFUL!
    awesome job overall:)
    July 16th, 2010 at 12:05am
  • Cheri .

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    This story literally made me cry,
    It's so beautiful and amazing.
    I know it's rather one shot,
    but I think you should make a story about this,
    Perhaps have it so she thinks she is literally seeing him,
    and everyone is just saying she is still in shock -but really,
    she is seeing him.

    Iunno, not trying to me controlling. xD
    Just, the idea is rather cute, and the way you made this story,
    it's just- I just really like it. :3

    - Cheri
    xoxo
    <3
    July 15th, 2010 at 11:57pm