Oh sorry about that. I blame the computer, but anyway. The reason I said wait is because I want to know that during this story if they date!! They should!! Meaning you should write a sequel to it ^.^ Anyways this is a really cool story which should be made into a sequel!! Nice discription of the guys by the way. I expectually loved the way you protrayed jimmy!
There are no words to describe how much I love you right now!! Dude, like...seriously! I was having such a shitty night and now I'm here cracking up! AHHH! MUCH MUCH MUCH BASSIST LOVE!! First of all, you've like...got my personality down pat. I'm a short, sarcastic, ball of fun haha. I love you so much.
“THEY HAVE TATER TOTS FOR LUNCH!” Jimmy yelled. The he must have noticed me. “Holy crap! They actually make people shorter then Johnny! And it isn’t a 12 year old?!” He said with a genuine shocked look on his face.