Awww, this was cute! I really liked it!
January 25th, 2011 at 06:14am
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Adorable story. I do agree with SilentWolf with the detail. The ending was a bit of a surprise, I wasn't expecting it. Really good story and good luck!July 22nd, 2010 at 10:49pm
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This is totally cute, I love it. Cadence is totally adorable, she'd make a beautiful flower girl! What a beautiful wedding!July 19th, 2010 at 03:19am
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Cute story. I do wish that it was longer and there were more detail. But it was good. I was interested in Candace and I wish I could've heard more about her. Good luck in the contest :)July 19th, 2010 at 12:53am
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Speechless. :)
It was just all around priceless.July 18th, 2010 at 05:25pm -
Okay so, to begin with the first paragraph made me want to keep reading. I liked how you mentioned that they were married already and that it was due to her pregnancy that they eloped. I thought it was a nice change then the traditional full out wedding all the time. I also liked how Megan wanted the traditional wedding so it was given to her, but only AFTER they had a child. The child seemed like a cutie like most 3 year old little girls, great description on her. I also like the way the characters interacted, it felt real and believable. I liked the moment that Brooks and Megan shared that was the cutest and was really sweet. I believed they were in love! =) I agree with the comments above, adorable, sooo cute and that it would make a great series! :) Best of luck in the contest!July 17th, 2010 at 06:39am
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Adorable! :)July 16th, 2010 at 02:14pm
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awwww!!
This was sooo cute!
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i like it its very cute in the end of the chapter u should continue :)July 15th, 2010 at 03:04am
