Second Heartbeat - Comments

I love this story. The way you played Jimmy was amazing, I can imagine him being like that. Zyn is just an awesome name, now if I ever have a son I'm naming him Zyn. I hope there's going to be a sequel but I subscribed to the prequel c:

I love it...I hope there is a sequel

love this story...wish there was a sequel!!

loved it. :)

Haha this story is epic. i love jimmys mr. duck xp

how can you not write a sequeal! please write more!

I request a sequel because this was awesome

THIS WAS AWESOME!!!
*pumps fist*
i loved it so badly, imma read it from the begining now again, and i hope u do a sequel!!
it would be fab!

OK I don't care how sick I am right now. YOU BETTER MAKE A FUCKING SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't just leave it there, I would never leave it there and I'm the queen of cliffhangers.

i wanna read more!! ><
update sooooon please x

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
you just game me the most hated thing i hate about stories!!
A CLIFFIE!!!! NOOOOOO

Damn go Brian

I like this story! It has interesting combination of ideas! Keep updating!

ooohhhh
i made it onto 3rd comment page!!
=P hehe ;D xx

WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
FINNALY!!!!!!
SYN AND V TOGETHER!!!!!!
AND BRIAN AND ZACKY!!!!!!!
AND NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ;'(
ZACKY'S DADDY CANT DIEEEEEEE
WAHHHHHHHH
and bahahahahahaha, i just so knew jimmy would react like that to the drink falling!!
and omg!!! update soooooonn
and i is hyperrrrrr
please update soooonnnn xxxxx

i must know what happens mor when you can please

Yay...Aww what noooooo!!!!!!!!!

*whimpers*
NO! Zacky cant die!!!
and they need to get zyn back!!! ><
update sooon, reall soon please x

D: I need to know if he's okay! Is that the end? Is this a sad ending? (In other words, do I have to kill you?)

OMG NOOOO ZACKY!!!!!!!