Gone - Comments

This was a really lovely story, I really liked it.
I'm always looking for good slashes to read, I'm
glad I ran in to this one. You did a great job on it. :)

This was really good. I liked it. I was a bit confused at first, but as I read further I understood what it was about. Great job!!!

Hm.. Me likes. -w-
Strikes a bit of cord in me. >.>
I like this though. It has a very... Human... element about it.
Like how he cusses and makes the comments about the laundry detergent.
Very well done. <3 :)

Pure brilliance. It's just amazing, for real.

WHY HAS THIS BEEN POSTED FOR A WEEK AND I WAS NOT INFORMED?!

*ahem*

Amazing, as usual. Very sad, very poetic, and very real. It's good to have you back, darling.

I really, really loved this. It DID make me cry, JUST like the contest said! I could feel the pain and emotion, and relate to it. You are an AMAZING writer. I can't even write a nice, long detailed comment because it was just perfect. Great piece, I really enjoyed it.

Thank you for entering the contest, I'd say good luck; but you don't need it.

That was absolute perfection. No joke. This is me being serious.
From the start you have me curious as to what is going on.

I’m not the type to cling to people, to show them any sort of emotion.
I’m the type of person that scares others, even if I don’t mean it.

I really liked that usage of words. That really tells you so much about
this character. Putting you inside his head, tenfold.

Then the laundry degertent. I thought that was odd at first but now I see that holds
some symbolism. He is holding onto something that meshes with his love.

I though he was going to do something drastic to stop Caleb from leaving but I think
the ending was perfect. It kind of floored me in a way but I still loved it.

You managed to put so many emotions, and a short yet simple plot into such little writing,
which is incredible.

I think this is one of my favorite pieces that you have written.

And that banner is so PRETTY. I love it. <3

Holy Crap Missy, that was.... just brilliant and the banner and layout was fantastic, and I just love you to pieces anyways <3

One-Shot for One-shot!

Okay, first, I love the banner and layout. Both are really simple and don't distract :D Second, you convey so many emotions into one short story. And I love second person narrative. It's so hard for me to write a story like this, but you make it seem so effortless. It's amazing. Seriously. You did a wonderful job on this (: <3

I think you did a great job with this! Seriously, how you're able to convey so much emotion in such a limited amount of words is beyond me. I'm envious of your ability to write something so powerful. I just wish that you could admit how good you are at this. Seriously, great job!

Wow, that was so amazing. I love slashes. Hehe. [: And it was so emotional, and so sad. Great work. :D

Oh it's so sad... Aw, rejection. And it's even worse because it almost seems Caleb's leaving the other guy because it's a taboo for guys to love eachother. Good job though. :)