Finding Home - Comments

This was sooo good !
You showed emotions and feelings extremely well !

This was sweet. Again, I really like that you put real life facts into the story to make it much more realistic. And I completely agree with PensRock. It must be hard to live somewhere knowing you could potentially have to leave at any time. Anyways, I really liked this :)

I think this is a very sweet story.
I can't imagine how hard it must be to live a life where you can be uprooted at any time and be forced to move to another city, or even another country.
I guess this just proves that their love is strong enough to handle that pressure.
Good luck with the contest,
& Good luck with Frolov. I hope he remains a King for you.