Angel - Comments

Love this.
Can they be any cute? Lol

i really like it. like really like it. Skylar's (er's?) p.o.v was super sad but overall i like it! keep it up!

That is way depressing.
I felt like crying just reading that.
I love Sky's POV. You should write in it in some of the future chapters.
I miss having the sudden inspiration for stories how you do. I have them but they are pretty scarce.
Anyways great update hun.
Update soon?

WHOA.
I really love this story.
:)
*subscribes*

FIRST!!!
Haha :)
I claim comment virginity(:
Hmmm....
Okay, here's my take on the first chapter.

There were some spelling mistakes, and me being my Spelling OCD, I have to fix them. When you saw, "where going", it should be, "we're going". When you say, "I have to pick up my little sisters to", it should be, "I have to pick up my little sister too".
(I'm aware that it's not the tight content in which the main character says it, but it gets my point across)
Also,
The song title is A Little Piece of Heaven by Avenged Sevenfold, not 'Little Piece of Heaven'.
Terribly sorry if I sound like I'm tagging on you, but these things tend to bug me easily.

To me, the paragraphs seem a little long, but that's just me.
And you tend to skip around a lot, changing the scene too drastically.

Sorry, but just telling you how it is.

To conclude;
I hope I wasn't too much of a bitch, and I really would like to see improvement and I want to see where this goes!!