Sour Lemons - Comments

Keep Writinggg :D
You stopp when itt was getting gooddd

Keep Writinggg :D
You stopp when itt was getting gooddd

Lame Ending.
Jussayin.

omg!!!!! you CANT end it like that! bull!

that waz end?!?!?! *dies* dammit.

Its a really great start!
But the layout color blinds me.
:(
maybe change it up a little,
and put the lime green in the story border,
so its still there,
but not as harsh on the eyes,
but its your layout, do whatever.

i like ur story so far! :)

so i like it so far; the boys r adorable

i just don't think u should describe the character appearances in the story description- that's for the story itself. And as cute as it is, the story seems a little....bland. I realize its just the beginning, but try to spice it up. Just pointers.

Keep it up tho

i just started reading this story and its really good thus far :)
update soon

I love this story, Kayden and Emmet are adorable.

I Swear If You Go To Camp and Leave Me ;
I Can't Believe You Made Emment DISLIKEEE Me . D;

Can I just say that I love this? It's just.. awh.

i comment!
so does this mean updates? :D

Hninn ! Trentonnn ?

haha i was wondering why everything was green instead of yellow if it was lemons :)

OMG, I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE YOUR LAYOUT! Sorry,hyper. Anywayz, I can't wait to read more! :)

Heheh:)
-i love thtt i'm in the story +&
-i like Kayden Better:) Because's He Bi and Shxt .

oh emmet
you make me laugh :]
*subscribes*

When I read: "Yeah I just kinda fell !" I chuckled. :D
Yeah, he just "kinda" fell over - nothing big (like falling face down on a hard wooden floor). :D
Ew...
A brown banana? :&
That's...sick. :P
:O That's one big school.

I agree with That Kid; Mysterious (: but yeah, keep writing