I'm Lost Without You - Comments, page 2

love2luv (100)

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keep! and alternate! Love this story already, adored the last one!

November 27th, 2011 at 07:43pm

tiffagold (100)

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Keep this and alternate their povs :) can't wait to see what happens!

November 25th, 2011 at 03:49pm

my pen is big (100)

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I can't wait for the next chapter!! :DD Please post when you can! I adore this story ^^

November 23rd, 2011 at 01:45am

anjelOfvengeance (100)

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i loved im the one in charge and i cant wait for this. id be soooo sad if you didnt write it! and you should alternate!

November 11th, 2011 at 08:05pm

Ashlehbob (100)

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Continue writing this!!!!

October 28th, 2011 at 02:50pm

Danni Disaster (100)

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Alternate for sure.

October 27th, 2011 at 09:29pm

Pleasure right here (100)

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I thin kyou should alternate like you did for your prequel, it'd be much better. Love the first chapter though.

October 26th, 2011 at 07:38pm

VioletChelsea (100)

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keep keep keep keep keep forever <3

October 18th, 2011 at 12:38am

Durch-Den-Monsun-87 (100)

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WOOT!!!! loved the first chapter! annddd i say have it in BOTH views. i like getting the alternate views.

October 17th, 2011 at 12:37pm

Kitty Lunatic (100)

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So I had just read the last of the prequel and commented. And now I read the first of this chapter. I'm sooooo happy you decided to go with the sequel:D just have to love those boys. I think it should be alternating still. Makes it easier to know what's going on in the otter one head. I love the prequel, so I know I'll love the sequel, keep writing. You have an amazing talent for it.

October 5th, 2011 at 08:42am

atypical (100)

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I think alternating :) It seems to get both of their thoughts across better, and I love them both too much to choose. Also, isaudhfaskjd Mason. I love him so much!

October 4th, 2011 at 05:32am

Lo_east (100)

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alternate! and awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I liek this too much

October 2nd, 2011 at 10:04pm

Cuckoo (100)

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Alternate please! I love Rain he's adorable :)

October 2nd, 2011 at 08:16pm

Hot Chelle Rae (100)

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YAY! I think this story should be in Nate's and Rain's POV
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October 2nd, 2011 at 06:47am

hatsu-kouen2143 (100)

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Awww!! that's so cute! Homecoming stories are always interesting :D And really adorable.
Honestly... It's up to you. Whatever you're more comfortable with writing. I like both of them, but it depends on who's story this really is.

October 2nd, 2011 at 06:00am

Baby_Sevenfold (100)

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Love the chapter!!!!!
I like it with the alternating POV's because you see what both Rain and Nate are thinking. Or even just doing a couple of Rain's POV's to get his thinking in the story would be. With switching I liked having to know what the other was thinking about an event.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!! =D

October 2nd, 2011 at 02:54am