I really like the banne nad layout, and when i saw it featured alex gaskarth, i was happy haha :]. The summary is quite sad, she gets taken by social services cuz her mom's a burn out. But, at least her brother can take her in. I'm excited to see where her and Alex's relationship takes her.
I would never want to go into foster care, unless it was absolutely nesssaary, i would feel like such a burden, you know? haha i like how she's annoying the social service's lady haha. I think that her and her brother will get closer again honestly. This is seriously an interesting story, and I hope you will get tons of good feeback on it! YOu both are very good writers have fun doing this project! :]
I don't usually read Alex Gaskarth stories. I think I even spelled his name wrong BUT this one was pretty good. It kept me interested. You did a good job with this c: ps. Your layout is really nice!
Chapter four made me laugh; “Wh-who's there?!” I called out, my heart beating faster as a relatively large 'thump' came from the other side of the wall. “I've got a gun!”
It was just a cat. I have to say that next time when I'm scared. But I hope I don't end up seeing a cat after those threats XD
Sorry I took so long, I really am a fast reader....like super fast. But my laptop sure isn't fast :P
This had such simple thoughts, and made me chuckle lightly in a few parts. The chapters were short ans sweet, and the layout was lovely :3 I loved that picture, and the blue that went with it.
"Sometimes," He said, "But I have Spencer to keep me company." I raised my eyebrows. "Spencer?" "My cat." He said, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. Alrighty then.--As said above, this part was very funny.
"Sometimes," He said, "But I have Spencer to keep me company." I raised my eyebrows. "Spencer?" "My cat." He said, as if it was the most obvious thing in the world. Alrighty then. -x- Best.Freaking.Part.Ever <3 Updatee.
COMMENT VIRGINITY! TAKE IT, TAKE IT, TAKE IT! Okay, I'm done, sorry. xD Anyway, I'm excited to see where this leads to, but the plot seems a little boring. You're gonna have some twists to it right? :D Can't wait 'till you update!