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  • Mxprincess241

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    this was really cute too :)
    July 29th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • Jessica;

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    Freakin' adorable, Brianna.
    I'd be anything TJ Oshie asked me to be.
    Anything.
    <3333 you
    July 31st, 2010 at 02:31am
  • kare_bear

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    loved the crocs ;)
    and the history between the two
    ahh, unrequited lovee.
    very well written!
    July 24th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • MissLis

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    I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaly loved this!
    I love TJ, which makes a good start, but this was awesome!
    great how you made the oneshot span so much time into just one chapter!
    July 23rd, 2010 at 08:02am
  • Rylie_

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    That was really good.

    I did want to punch him when he said "there's no us." He was a douche in that part.
    July 19th, 2010 at 07:10pm
  • Jon Toews

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    awe that was so sweet :)

    and i agree with my ranger friend above ^
    i wanted to punch him in that part too!

    :)
    July 19th, 2010 at 02:40pm
  • Multi Colored Ranger

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    AWE! That was so cute! I loved this one shot so much! That was super cute. And TJ is amazing. Even though he was a bit of a douche when he said, "There is no...us." I could have punched him. Haha.
    July 19th, 2010 at 04:56am
  • PensRock

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    He wore a white polo, blue plaid shorts, navy Crocs, and a backwards blue ball cap. - - that sounds like a typical Teej outfit.

    Oh no. You go socialize with the customers. It's good for business." She winked. YAY for Mom!!!

    He missed me, and I wasn't going to bother lying anymore and say I didn't miss him. - - Good. No lying!!!!

    I'm thinking about moving there officially after I graduate. It's got the Northern Minnesota feel but it also has the city feel I've always been wanting." I mused, telling him what I hadn't even discussed with my parents yet.
    "Good. I'm glad you're doing well, Mads."
    - - No Teej. You are supposed to say, how about you move to St. Louis with me instead. LOL

    The innocent brush of TJ's hand against mine had transformed into kisses, love bites, and sex- a lot of sex. - - HAHA Yes, I think he just has that affect on women.

    What happens after tomorrow?" I asked him - - Oh man this question scares me.

    "Mads..." He started, but stopped, making my breath hitch in my throat. I was about to get confirmation that what I was hoping was more, really was just a summer fling. "There is no...us." - - Oh crap!!! I was afraid of that.

    I cried more than I could ever remember crying, I failed my first test, and I skipped class more times than I could count on my hands, - - Men Suck

    The corners of my eyes started to tear up at the memory as I looked down the bar, seeing TJ sitting at the end, hazel eyes blazing as he watched me. - - YES!!!

    "You've always been my main squeeze, TJ Oshie." I told him honestly before grabbing the back of his neck, and kissing him with no intention of stopping. - - AWWWWW

    You are right - I loved this. Totally loved it. You made me love him, hate him and love him all in one single one shot.

    I love your love stories!!! And this was great.

    Did I mention I thought your graphic was beautiful?

    Love the story, love the graphic, love TJ, love your story, love all your stories. <3<3<3
    July 19th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • MaybeitsBee

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    I've missed reading stuff you've written (:
    Even though I hate the song Corona and Lime (with a passion), your writing helped me tolerate it and see some good in it ;D
    July 18th, 2010 at 11:58am
  • penschick8771

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    i absolutely loved it
    you did an amazing job with this
    July 18th, 2010 at 05:33am
  • MaliceInWonderland

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    Ah how cuteeeeee!!! Gotta love Teej. Great story!! <333
    July 18th, 2010 at 04:09am
  • AlishaIeroVeex

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    So cute
    : )
    July 18th, 2010 at 02:24am
  • athenapocalypse

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    cuuuuuuuuutttteee!!
    Oh boys: can't live with them, can't live without them.
    and how can one say no to t.j.?
    July 18th, 2010 at 01:48am