It was really good.... I liked the relationship between the step mom and the kid, it's alot like the one I had with my step mom.... anyways.... Love it.... You have a great tallent when it comes to writing.... and since were talking about horror movies earlier, I thought I should mention that there is a horror move titled Grace, it's really lame and about a bay who eats womans boobs.... haha... keep up the good work, can't wait to read chapter two!!!! XD
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thanks haha xx I'm updating soonish.