Olive and Arrow - Comments

What the hell you mean eleven months pregnant???? It only go's nine you know???

The last line was fucking cute as hell....I love this story..... they need to get married before the kid get there tho.... if Nick wants to make an honest women outta her.

I want to be the girl for Colton! My name is Camille. (: I am crazy and fun. I am 5'5. I am filipino with long dark brown hair with side bangs. I have big brown doe eyes. I am very shy when you first meet me but once I am comfortable, I am the most outgoing person there is. I just want to give you a glimpse of my character. Hopefully, you choose me to be in your story. If not, it's okay. Message me if you have any questions.

Keep updating. You are a wonderful writer. Love your story <3

ahhh I seriously love this story :)

HE BETTER SAY YES!!!! AND OH MY GOD I LOVE HOW YOU ADD PICS TO YOUR ARTICLES LIKE THAT!!!! I WANT MORE.... I WISH I COULD STAY AND YOU COULD WRITE MORE BUT I NEED SLEEP... :(

HEEEEEEEEEEYYYYY.... you can update again for me while I'm gone, so then I can read when I get home from work? DEAL?? K, thanks :D

i really like this story(: !

Ah, loving the bad boy image yet caring side of sweet Nicholas (: can't wait for more.

Ahh! Figures you'd mention Samantha Barks... -_- haha jk. I know how you feel about her. Amazing update. Finally. (: love you.

Who's Samantha? She wasn't mentioned in earlier chapters.....
The sex is so not Nick Jonas but it's a nice twist. :)

I loved it.

awhh I missed this!! Can't wait for the next update :)

Oh my gosh! Chris needs to leave Annie, her family, Nick's family and the lovely couple themselves alone! Ugh. He makes me sick! Thanks for updating. Please udpate again soon. ^_^

Oh my gosh. I'm having a total girly moment. This story is competely incredible. You're an amazing author!

Sammy!!!! omg, I can't believe it!!! I can't wait for your next update. I miss you girl!! luv chu sammeroo. (:

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Yay! but that was sad too :( I think maybe Chris? I dont know...

Aww! They did "that"! Finally! lol I loved it! Thanks for updating. Please update again soon.

oh and if you end up choosing me as one of the characters, obviously Yale is a bit older so I don't actually have to be 17 haha :)

love it!!!! :) can't wait for the next update! and I would love to be one of the guy's girlfriends :)

Name: Lauren
Age: 17
Looks: 5'5, brown hair, big blue eyes
Boy: Yale, I guess. Either is fine though! :)
Country: I have always wanted to be from Australia so let's just pretend! hahaha

Hey, great update today. It was passionate and romantic. It was just amazing. You better update sooner than soon! I would love to be one of the guy's girls. (:

Name: Camille. (but I have a couple nicknames like Cam, Cammie, Caramelle, Camel xD ) Call me whatever you want!
Age: I'm 15 but honestly, you can change that to whatever you want!
Looks: 5'5. Filipino, so tan skin. Long, straight, dark brown hair with light brown highlights. Full bangs. Big brown eyes. Fun-sized :D
Boy: Either is fine with me. I've actually have had a crush on a guy named Colton before [; BUT again, either would be fine
Country: USA (:

Hey, message me if you have any questions. AND REMEMBER, update sooner than soon! :D

Sammy that was great. I miss your writing. Can't wait for more!! (: