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  • C V.D P

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    I love the layout, very beautiful.

    I love this. It's so strong, emotional and powerful. It's just really good. i love the different flows of emotions through the piece. Good job!
    May 15th, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • hibari.

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    This was beautifully chaotic.

    I love how she addresses the topics and points of being an individual or your own person. She practicalky screams at the four that she really doesnt give a damn at what they think of her. She acceps herself and at the same time kinda tells us that we should the same. This was beautiful.
    December 7th, 2010 at 08:14am
  • Coheed Kilgannon

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    This was great! It was nice and detailed, and slightly achy at the end.
    It actually reminds me of someone I know at school.
    August 15th, 2010 at 02:32am
  • silk tea.

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    I agree with Ava, this was very cute.
    The meaning behind it was excellent and portrayed perfectly.
    August 7th, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • desiher

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    I loved this. So short and to the point, yet detailed and full of feeling. The last line had so much impact; it's one of those things that I think stick with you.
    Amazing. ♥
    July 29th, 2010 at 03:16pm
  • losing control.

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    I've read this before, and I loved it even more this time.
    It's just so..beautiful and written perfectly.
    Very nice job (:
    July 19th, 2010 at 07:26am
  • little motorkitty;

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    I loved this, it seemed so realistic and true, I could really relate to it :)

    My life is one large, beautiful piece of art. Don’t you make me throw it away. - I love this line the most, it's so original and perfectly worded so well done.

    I'm not sure why, but this drabble kind of makes me think of people with mental disorders, I'm not sure why, just maybe how different you've written the person and the title. But it's a good thing, don't worry. I really like this, it's perfectly written :)
    July 18th, 2010 at 06:16am
  • Corps_Of_Corpses

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    This was so easy to relate to and it nice and short and described what you were trying to say perfectly. I loved it. Well done.
    July 18th, 2010 at 03:39am
  • Patty Lovell

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    I loved this drabble. It was short, and yet it said so much about her.
    The important things, this is amazing.
    July 18th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • Sundance Kid.

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    I love this. I can actually see this being said, like the girl was right next to. You're a really good writer.
    July 18th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • cola frank.

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    I thrive off of my own individuality.
    I really loved that line. :D

    This was so detailed and well written. It really captures the meaning of individuality.
    July 18th, 2010 at 03:22am
  • tsmith :D

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    well the layout thingy was GORGEOUS! and i loved the concept and message of this, but would you like to explain to me what a "drabble" is?
    July 17th, 2010 at 03:23am
  • youth and whiskey.

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    I really, really adored this.
    Though it was scarce in words, as a drabble should be, it is packed with detail.
    It presented a nice, clean, understandable message. I loved it! <3
    July 16th, 2010 at 08:59pm
  • losing control.

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    I love this.
    It was very detailed for not having many words.
    It was also relatable.
    Good job (:
    July 16th, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • tholomew plague.

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    I love it.
    Short and to the point, I know that's the point of drabble, but you did a really good job of getting that point across
    July 16th, 2010 at 06:49pm
  • Nanner.

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    This is excellent. c :
    I love the last line, But yet, I can’t stop loving you.
    It summarizes how many people feel in different relationships. It reminds me of how I feel about my mother sometimes.

    Relatable, detailed, short and sweet.
    I love it. :)
    July 16th, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • quinn in wonderland?

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    Aww.
    Lovelovelove.
    There are about ten different emotions shoved into this. I like how it flows.
    Kudos. 186 words and that much of a message. I'm impressed.
    July 16th, 2010 at 06:36pm
  • tiffany danielle

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    I liked this. (:

    It had some nice detail and I believe a nice message. There was also a sort of pretty layout as well. C:
    So, I believe you did a good job.
    July 16th, 2010 at 05:50pm