Damn your a good writer! I know I just commented, but I wanted to read Secrets, Spells, And Magical Powers before I commented on this ^ - ^ Its amazing!
thats a pretty good first time 3rd point of view. what i hate about school other then homework.. is that this one chick wont stop following me around, shes like a lapdog..and if i tell her to fuck off then.. well she might cry.. what a loser..but yeah update again soon :)
1. I think that Mel will end up living in that appartment, and her and all her friends will be good and healthy, and she'll still have her powers, and they'll all like each other. =]
2. Homework and waking up early. -.-
Lovely update. :) But I think chapter 10 and 11 are the same. :S
1. Who's your fav character? Hmm, I think Mel, because her awesome powers:D. Other than that, i think Colby, he's sweet. 2. If you could have any power what would it be? Hmm, think controling the elements, or be able to fly:D 3. Have you read any of my other stories? Yep, you're other one, i lost it's name, but you've deleted it. I'm going to read your other stories, as long as it isn't any horror thing, don't like that sort of stuff:P
So um... good chapter... Okay, answers. 1. Miles (I always gravitate toward the big brother type charries :D) 2. That's a tough one... I dunno... I'll get back to you on that one 3. Not besides SS&MP
I agree with shatteredheart and Xx-fairywings-xX... I think if she got seriously hurt, that would be... well, not good ovbiously, but it would make for a good story :D
One more thing... what if she got her powers taken away by choice? Like, if she asked the professor to do that, because of what Miles said? Just a thought...
Anyway, great chapter :D Looking foreward to more!