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  • Midnightbloom17

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    AMAZING!!!!!! i swear i was crying at the end! sooooooo good! you have serious talent! you could sell this as a real book. i'd buy it! promise!
    February 25th, 2011 at 03:06am
  • Audrey Hepburn.

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    Damn your a good writer! I know I just commented, but I wanted to read Secrets, Spells, And Magical Powers before I commented on this ^ - ^
    Its amazing!
    December 20th, 2010 at 03:05am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    WTF I subscried and you updated and I didn't get any update notifacations WTF screw you guys I'm going home.
    October 1st, 2010 at 07:16am
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Wow,
    You're story was amazing.
    So wonderfull:)
    It's sad that it's over, but even fairytails have to end, right:P

    It was a great story:)
    September 15th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • WinterStarsAlive

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    :'( It's over... that's sad... :'(

    Much sadness...
    September 15th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • little_dreamer

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    Awesome update!!!!
    It was great can't wait to see more =)
    September 14th, 2010 at 01:09pm
  • WinterStarsAlive

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    Nooooooo! Only the epilouge? :'(

    'Tis a sad day in reader-land...
    September 14th, 2010 at 12:48pm
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Yeey, she's alive.
    She probably lost her powers, didn't she?
    That's why here eyes are now blue, instead of purple.
    Am i right?
    September 13th, 2010 at 11:04am
  • little_dreamer

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    Yay for melbeing alive!!
    Sad for only a few left but it was soo good!
    September 12th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • WinterStarsAlive

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    Yay! She's alive! Good chapter...

    Can't believe there's only a few left :'(
    September 11th, 2010 at 11:55pm
  • little_dreamer

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    She has to live.
    She can't die like that :(
    September 8th, 2010 at 12:12pm
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Ofcourse she's gonna make it. Are you kidding me!!!

    What happened with Ryan, i think Mel killed him.
    OR he just dissapeared.:D
    September 8th, 2010 at 09:01am
  • O.o?

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    WOAH! Intense!!!!
    September 8th, 2010 at 04:28am
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Tun un, tun un. Imaging that eerie melody when that sharks cames swimming to youXD.

    Nice chapters, wonder what has happened.
    September 6th, 2010 at 05:29pm
  • allzac

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    thats a pretty good first time 3rd point of view.
    what i hate about school other then homework.. is that this one chick wont stop following me around, shes like a lapdog..and if i tell her to fuck off then.. well she might cry.. what a loser..but yeah
    update again soon :)
    September 6th, 2010 at 08:50am
  • NobodyThatMatters_13

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    1. I think that Mel will end up living in that appartment, and her and all her friends will be good and healthy, and she'll still have her powers, and they'll all like each other. =]

    2. Homework and waking up early. -.-

    Lovely update. :) But I think chapter 10 and 11 are the same. :S
    September 5th, 2010 at 09:20pm
  • WinterStarsAlive

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    1. I have no clue! Don't really wanna guess either, cause I know that you'll end it awesomly anyway! :D
    2. Hm... homework.
    September 5th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    O o, Ryan's going to destroy there whole plan...

    1. Who's your fav character?
    Hmm, I think Mel, because her awesome powers:D. Other than that, i think Colby, he's sweet.
    2. If you could have any power what would it be?
    Hmm, think controling the elements, or be able to fly:D
    3. Have you read any of my other stories?
    Yep, you're other one, i lost it's name, but you've deleted it.
    I'm going to read your other stories, as long as it isn't any horror thing, don't like that sort of stuff:P
    September 3rd, 2010 at 06:52pm
  • WinterStarsAlive

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    So um... good chapter...
    Okay, answers.
    1. Miles (I always gravitate toward the big brother type charries :D)
    2. That's a tough one... I dunno... I'll get back to you on that one
    3. Not besides SS&MP
    September 2nd, 2010 at 08:31pm
  • WinterStarsAlive

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    I agree with shatteredheart and Xx-fairywings-xX... I think if she got seriously hurt, that would be... well, not good ovbiously, but it would make for a good story :D

    One more thing... what if she got her powers taken away by choice? Like, if she asked the professor to do that, because of what Miles said? Just a thought...

    Anyway, great chapter :D Looking foreward to more!
    September 1st, 2010 at 02:56pm