I agree with the person above me. It's very realistic; there's a lot of girls in my school who think they're in love with someone, and end up getting their hearts broken because it wasn't real. I also enjoyed your descriptions of the characters (and the muffin, lol) because it made me feel as if I were the main character, and in her place. Great job and good luck in the contest. (:
this is a great short story, really realistic. its only a chapter and not a very long one, but its as though i know the characters personally, you are great with personalities.
I also enjoyed your descriptions of the characters (and the muffin, lol) because it made me feel as if I were the main character, and in her place.
Great job and good luck in the contest. (: