Ahahaha. I loved this. James Potter is so lame. Good use of the pick-up line! Overall, I could totally see this happening as a legitimate way of James and Lily ending up together. James just seems like the type to use lame pick-up lines... :] Nice entry.
I've never actually read anything in the Marauders era before, that was really interesting!
Had to have a major giggle at James though, I can totally see him being that cheesy =]