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  • FrankJScott

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  • JustShrugAtlas

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    BEAUTIFUL! That made me so happy and hopeful. Lol. Never stop writing
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  • SpriceThePrice

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    Definitely a story I will read over again someday.
    November 13th, 2015 at 04:31am
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    Definitely a story I will read over again someday.
    November 13th, 2015 at 04:31am
  • SpriceThePrice

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    I loved this story! Who is Alana by the way? she looks so familiar, so familiar that I've been staring at your banner for like ten minutes now trying to figure her out haha. Anyways, AWESOME work.
    November 13th, 2015 at 04:31am
  • Deltagrey

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    i LOVED your story! i personally don't think you should do a sequel because it ended in a good place.
    February 4th, 2011 at 07:34am
  • blueangelsvntn

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    Aw, loved it!
    January 12th, 2011 at 07:26am
  • Loveless1

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    I really enjoy reading this story, you ended it perfectly I really don't want a sequel. This story is great just the way it is.
    January 6th, 2011 at 11:36pm
  • hachie

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    So within a year they got married?
    Wow I love how descriptive the wedding was!
    I bet Alana looked so beautiful with her wedding dress and Ava looked so adorable! X3
    Billy has changed so much but is still has parts of the old Billy from the beginning.
    The part that made me laugh so hard was when Bodie caught the garter and Baggy made the comment on who would want to marry him!
    And the part where Heco was dread about asking Cat to marry him and him possible getting killed by the drugs before he can pop the question,
    Wow right after their wedding, Billy gets called away for business, I guess Alana truly loves Billy so much that she willing to put up with the business Billy runs.
    I really don't want sequel, I just want them to be happy but I believe that decision is up to you!
    I very much enjoyed reading your and whether or not you make a sequel I will read and comment on it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    January 6th, 2011 at 08:13am
  • a7x babe56

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    this by far is one of my favorites i love little baby ava already
    and shes a daddys girls like me lol
    January 5th, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • Mergan

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    Another great update. Please write more soon :D
    January 5th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • hachie

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    Wow she really got angry there didn't she, and the pain help fuel that rage that she had toward Billy!
    So he broke her heart so that she would hat him and doesn't want her to apart of his lifestyle.
    Even though he pushed her away, he is alot worse without her there because he might not admit it but he needs just as much as she needs him.
    Won't that be a sight to see, Billy scared of a little infant baby girl, afraid he might hurt her somehow.
    So her father was resentful toward Billy because he didn't want him to take his first born away like he did to his second born.
    It must be hard to put all the hatred toward Billy aside so that his daughter can have what she wanted and that's Billy.
    So their daughter doesn't want to be hold by anybody else except her mother and father.
    Man she is going to be a daddy's girl because she already has him wrapped around her tiny finger already.
    I wonder what will happen now that their daughter is there and if Billy will stay there or just take off again.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • blueangelsvntn

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    Yay! The baby is coming, exciting :D
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:00am
  • hachie

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    Wow I am happy that she is trying so hard to move on from the asshole but it's going to be hard since she has fallen so in love with him and is having a child from him too.
    Okay I am confuse to why he did that to her when she was living with him......I still can't believe that she hasn't had a problems with the baby after all Billy put her through.
    And Karma has granted her some luck because she finally got a permanent job at the high school where all of her students love her after she has gone through.
    I am still stretchy about Billy even though Ally sats otherwise because you can't totally get rid of old habits no matter what you try.
    I see that her father still hates and resents Billy for almost destroying his family and putting them through unbelievable pain.
    And the more I imagine her dad running around like a headless chicken is making me laugh so hard, it's a good thing that she has some humor out of it.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    January 5th, 2011 at 04:35am
  • a7x babe56

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    ahhhhh!!! the babys coming yayy i was waiting for this
    i ope billy feels like a fucking idot ha!
    January 5th, 2011 at 03:58am
  • hachie

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    Okay I just got done reading your story!
    And I just want to die right now.
    After all she did for him, being there for him and loving he just goes back to his old ways.
    To tell you the truth he is going to end up like his father, old, fat, alone with the occasion of a whore keeping him company.
    Alana should just go back where she was before because all Billy does is break her heart even more and the last straw was when he told her he was just using her to get revenge on her dad.
    This whole entire mess is his fault because he had his younger brother kill Alana's brother, and then her father got revenge by killing Billy's brother and friend.
    I am surprise that Alana didn't have miscarriage with all the stress he is going through right now.
    If he really does let her go, does that mean he would let fall in love with someone else or is he going to go all physco possessive ex boyfriend again?????
    He could have a family, a place he can go back to and be happy but instead he choose a life of loneness and pathetic to have to pay a whore for company and pleasure.
    Billy Darley will regret ever breaking Alana's heart when she finds someone to love!
    Maybe her and family could move away from that place so she can move on in life.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
    January 5th, 2011 at 02:54am
  • Mergan

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    I love the story. I can't believe he just left he better come back.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • a7x babe56

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    that mother f****** dick wad he is such a a** hole
    i love it please update again i hope he comes cralling back
    January 1st, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • essie2395

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    Wow! I really love your story! The ending of chapter 27 shocked the crap it of me!
    December 31st, 2010 at 10:44am
  • a7x babe56

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    nononononoo billy cannot be dead or i will cry hes alive right please say yes
    December 31st, 2010 at 06:59am