The Prophecy - Comments

Wow this was good!

you should write more its so good...keep it up

This was good. I like where it's going. Hmm...I wonder what happended to Nick and Darren?

ahhhhh soo goood! I love it

In the fourth paragraph, it says "Jake always threw great party's". It should be partys. I thought the story was good, and I ca't wait to see were it gose. The other thing I want to point out is that if you were throwing a party were alcohol was handed out to minors, you wouldn't want loud music or flashy lights that would annoy the neighbors, and cause them to call the cops on you.