Secrets - Comments

hm. i'm glad i found this (:
it's cute. well...Kyle's really cute, but y'know :D
update soon?

sorry it took so long to comment
but i loved this update :]
much too much

LOVE IT SO FAR!!! but here's a tip, when Kyle talks, minimize the stuttering...like maybe the first and last word in a regular sentence... and if it's a big 'ol paragraph then just stutter about 5 to 8 words. it will make reading it so much easier and add a little more effect instead of reading almost every word trying to imagine the stutter... it get kinda hard and annoying, no offence....and u dont have to do what i say i'm just giving u sum advice!! :) but great job!!!!!!!!!! i'm loving the story!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) oh and i'm on the same boat w/ "nicholas joseph;" update now!!!!! and it is sooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Awh, Kyle,
you're so fucking adorable.
:3
Poor thing. x]
-hugs-

OHMYGODDDD.
I almost died because that was so ridiculously cute<3333
I want you to update this. Naow. D:
Pleaseeeee?<3333333333333

OH MY GODDD, I LOVE THIS SOOOOOO MUCH <333

i got your message as i was reading the new chapter
which i loved :3

the evil plan was a success!

-Squees-
Sho cuteeeeeeeee <3333333

i cant wait to find out O.O

GAHHHH.
HOW COME I NEVER SUBBED TO THIS!? >///<
I thought I did. D:
-Subs-

but he likes you tooooo!

it has life!

I am a fan of your story my friend.=D
I think you should make the chapters longer though.=)

i smell progress :D

Eric's a douche -_-

oh wow...it took me until the second chapter to realize that this story is sort of....oh how to put this...a more descriptive beginning to your entry for my contest. wow...how sad on my part...
anyways...very good. i'm very curious as to what will happen in this story...like how they meet and such, how they get together. either way, i just wanna read this story, haha. great opening, great descriptions, yet still beautifully simple like your story Neon Signs. I would love to see where this one will go, and i am definitely subscribing to it. keep up all the great work, and i hope i see your entries in another contest of mine. i enjoy reading your work.

I really like this story so far! It's cute and I think it'll be a good story :) Oh, and McKenna is the cutest :) Reminds me a bit of Genevieve <3

i think you're off to a good start with this. i like that there are heaps of different factors that could cause drama - like kyle being bullied, and the fact that christian has a child (which, i did not see coming, lol).
um, yeah. so, good start. it's got the potential to be a good story and i hope you continue it. my only complaint is that the chapters should be longer! lol.
(:

(also. it says i have to fix this... is a prequel, but on the summary for that it says it's part of the actual story. and i don't know if i should read it now or not. like, if i read it now will it ruin anything? or am i meant to read it now as a sort of prologue? idk!)

o_o
poor kyle!