Isolated - Comments

This is really good! =D Very good describtion of schizophrenia. ^_^ This is very well written. It's one of those stories you want to see more. =)

And nice layout, too. :)

This is amazing but a bit choppy like silk tea. said.
I loved the banner and layout.
Amazing job! Your really gave me a good impression of a schizophrenic.

Sushaydance1221 Contest Judging

The writing of this was very choppy. It almost seemed immature in a way. But I feel as though that was the tone of the character. It sounded of that of an uneducated person, or someone who has a mental disability, and obviously this character did. However, I feel as though the intelligent thought process she seemed to have didn't really fit her psychological issue. If she's as young as you say she is then I don't really feel that her vocabulary would be as good as it is.

Schizophrenics, are by nature, rather immature. Through a level, they're intelligent, but I doubt they're vocabulary would be as well written as this.. But the story, was interesting. I like how you've portrayed the image I gave you into that of an asylum. I would've done a classroom, an abandoned one or something. Very well done.

WOW this was good!! :))))
so dark and wow. thought-proving really.
you got skillz, yo.
and the layout went perfect with itt.

I thought it was interesting. The last line is my favorite. :]