Open Your Eyes - Comments

  • GraceHerren

    GraceHerren (100)

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    I love your story. It's really great.:)
    July 18th, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • angelsXgrowXwings

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    Haha yeah i am pretty awesome at run-on sentences I just never realize I am doing it. It is awesome you read my story and I really appreciate it. I have added the chapters now that I have so far. So please read on and let me know what you think. Thanx
    -Alisha
    July 18th, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • Full Of it

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    The story is a bit confusing...but tha's how all good stories are in the beginning.

    Though, try and be careful of run-on sentences.

    I LOVE LOVE LOVE your vocabulary. It isn't overbearing and it has a nice taste to the story.

    Keep writing onto it :)
    July 18th, 2010 at 04:17am