Just Breathe - Comments

Basically I am in love with Shaun and Katie. <3

I love the Shaun part. It was so sweet, my heart was like "Awww." It was so adorable my heart literally spoke...it did freak me out a little bit but that's what happens.

Anyways, keep it up.

Oh and next chapter is looking like Katie and Jack talking....I guess no Shaun...but Katie is the best so it shall be perfect!

You will be updating this more often. End of story. Start pumping yourself up.

I love Katie and Shaun. <3
Especially in this chapter for some reason. They were like super adorable.
It made my heart race. :P

Let's see where this goes!

P.S. Greg <3

*happy Dance*
it was Amazing!!!!!!!!!
i loved it update soon please ???? :D

1. Katie is actually perfection. <3
2. Yes, I look at the outfits.
3. Perfect thing about Connor being hotter than imaginable or whatever you said.
4. Stop making YOUR damn character remind me like MAJOR much about my own self. Like your fanfiction character acts like me. Hello, my great lines belong to KATIE! <3
5. I seriously read it and go "I said that like yesterday." "I had that in my story." "That is like exactly something I would do...no wait, have done." Jeez.

Update...now.

Updates? please:)

Updaates? please?

So Mibba stopped having its bitch fit so that I could read this. Cute chapter... I think Katie and Jack need to have a closer relationship, that can really cause drama and changes in feeling. I will explain later if you don't get it already. Well update now. And I promise I will update as soon as I have the time. Reading this was hard enough.

AWWWWWWWWWWWW :(

poor jack :(
i don't like conor anymore cause now jack will find ot what she did and then she'll break her promise and he'll be all sad and i want her to be with jack!!!!

can't wait for another up date XD
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yes jack and laceyXD
i can't wait for an update XD
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Yeaah mann! Jack and Lacey<3

Yaay u updated :D

EWWWWWWWWWW! WHY DIDN'T YOU USE THE CAMP OUTFITS! UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This chapter seemed rush, without any lovey moments or greggy moments. But it shall do for now.

Awww i liked lacey and jack :P

I like the redone chapter. Shaun and Katie got there justice! haha. And Greggggggggg, party, heaven?!?!?!?

1. You have two f'in hours for the next one, but I am actually going to go to bed because I have to get up early and because I am bored. But when I wake up, there better be a f'in update or I sware I will never talk to you again. 2. Your Katie-Shaun moment was shyt! :) haha.

P.S. I will never talk to you again. And that will be awkward when we do lunch. But just in case I wake up and it happens to be around 2am. I would be happy to see an update. But more like when I wake up later. And you know I will keep my promise. :)

LOVE IT! UPDATE!

This was a cute chapter. Update.

Those Katie parts are just so amazing. :) haha. Not to much of lets-make-lacey-alexa going on in this chapter. And you changed how I thought you were making the Connor Lacey moment. Whatevs. :) haha. Update!

i loved it
it was awesome XD
damn she shouldn't have said anything about that tattoo of hers hould she??...............

Awwww. Thanks for putting my shitty ass story up. :) haha. I likey so far. But I don't like that you are having Lacey say alot of the comment I actually made in real life! It hurts me. :( haha