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  • Camcas555

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    I really liked this story. :)
    I think it could have ended differently, maybe got Jason and Joey together again or something? I think that would be a lot better ending.
    But still. Was a very good story, and you did well with the drug and sex scenes. :) xx
    April 18th, 2013 at 08:05am
  • Not All Scars Show

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    I loved it, but you could have end the story differently. Perhaps you could have ended it with them agreeing to have sex in the back or the car with the last words being I love you or something. I would have liked a romantic ending however, that wouldn’t really work because it’s just not that kind of mushy story (which is a good change though so kudos :) ). With the current ending, it makes me (and other readers) believe there will be a sequel. (Which secretly I hope there is because I loved it). Anyways-great idea and I really enjoyed reading your story.
    May 31st, 2012 at 05:57am
  • appley92

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    I agree with VioletChelsea. Do Joey when shes an adult!!!! eek, you're do good!!!
    January 4th, 2012 at 05:51pm
  • appley92

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    AFUCKINGMAZING. KEEP GOING. IM LIKING IT. LIKE A TRILOGY OR A SERIES WOULD BE BETTER. MAYBE MASON NOW? SIIII :D

    <3
    January 4th, 2012 at 05:50pm
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Hey this story is amazing is there going to be a sequel besides the one with mason
    May 21st, 2011 at 07:36am
  • lazziebear

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    I LOOOOOVE THIS! i used to read it on wattpad every day until i realized u have a mibba! so i can comment! yayyyyyy! u r like one of my fav authors on here :)
    March 30th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • seeing stars

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    yaaaaayyyyyy for Joey and Caden! you seriously need to make this..oh i dunno, a trilogy maybe? :D
    February 22nd, 2011 at 05:25pm
  • orangeducktape4ever

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    <3
    I love this story.
    You made it end too quickly... :'(
    Oh well.. it had a good run.. and it was amazing all the way through.
    (:
    February 21st, 2011 at 03:27am
  • ElizabethCoffman

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    Ahaaha YAY!!!!!! her and CADEN!!!! Awesome. Can't wait.
    February 18th, 2011 at 11:34pm
  • SwaySwayBayBay.

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    NONONONONO DONT END
    YOU MAKE ME SAD :(
    February 18th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • EnjoyTheSilence

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    sequel?
    February 18th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • EllaCarden

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    will there be a sequel?
    February 18th, 2011 at 04:05am
  • mzsassydiva101

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    is there going to be a sequel
    February 18th, 2011 at 02:26am
  • VioletChelsea

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    i read it the entire time.
    you should continue for when joey is an adult...just saying =)
    February 18th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • mzsassydiva101

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    is there going to be a sequel
    February 18th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • jesibieber

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    This story is amazing. By far the best I have ever read, it is so addicting too.
    You should definitely write a sequel! Pleaaaaase?!(:
    February 18th, 2011 at 01:09am
  • rivals are insane

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    love the ending :)
    February 18th, 2011 at 01:09am
  • jami483

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    CLIFF HANGER. :(

    This was b r i l l i a n t! I absolutely love this story, and I will most definitely check out your new one?

    Do the fans a favor and write a sequel?! Haha. Lovely story!
    February 18th, 2011 at 01:04am
  • dreamgirl13

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    Is that the end??? That can't be the end yet!! Please write another sequel!!!
    February 18th, 2011 at 12:12am
  • alyxpaige

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    loveed it...you should write another sequel
    February 18th, 2011 at 12:00am
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