The Time Twister - Comments

Im The Baron (100)

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yeah havent finished the type up

July 24th, 2010 at 04:06pm

Karibachi (100)

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This is good... a little short but good.

July 24th, 2010 at 12:31am

Im The Baron (100)

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nice phrasing but still an inferno of hate can lead to an armaggedon of destructive behaviour

July 24th, 2010 at 12:24am

blahguy28740 (100)

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still seems pretty sketchy.

July 21st, 2010 at 05:54pm

Im The Baron (100)

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dude its a fan fic dont get techy

July 19th, 2010 at 11:34pm

blahguy28740 (100)

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I'm pretty sure there's copyright laws that say 'don't fucking copy the second charlie bone story or we will corrupt you financially'. Just a hint of advice. I'm sure Jenny Nimmo won't go beserk if she reads this. Have a nice day.

July 19th, 2010 at 09:10pm