You did a nice job of conveying the character's emotions within this piece. They layout coincided with the story title nicely.
I do have to point out a very large issue, though. The word you chose for my contest was anorexia. I'm afraid the eating disorder you described within your entry was in fact, bulimia.
People that suffer from anorexia nervosa do not throw up after eating. They don't eat, thus no throwing up.
Other than that, you did a pretty good job.
Thank you for getting yout entry completed in time. Good luck.<3
July 19th, 2010 at 06:20am
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They layout coincided with the story title nicely.
I do have to point out a very large issue, though.
The word you chose for my contest was anorexia.
I'm afraid the eating disorder you described within your entry was in fact, bulimia.
People that suffer from anorexia nervosa do not throw up after eating.
They don't eat, thus no throwing up.
Other than that,
you did a pretty good job.
Thank you for getting yout entry completed in time.
Good luck.<3