When in Venice - Comments

That was wonderful! I loved the characters and the plotline and especially how everything fell into place in the end. Perfect!

I spent all day reading this story and I love it. they're so cute together, and I really loved that it took place in London, and Venice.. It gives it a lot of originality (which is very much needed here on mibba). not too short, and it have a great ending!!

This is my new favorite... well until I read another one I love!!! <3

Je suis de retour! Haha.

I've been gone long, miss me? :p

Awww.. :3
This is so cute and I can't believe you'd hurt him like that, I almost hated you, God, can I flay John? please, please?! But all throughout the end I just squealed and hummed in amusement and contentment, it's so perfect, I should know to expect nothing less from you. :)

<3

Okay I read this entire story in school yesterday and if I fail my next chemistry test, it's this story's fault. 

This was so good! All of it! From Quinn's drama with John to Dante's volunteer work at the monastery!

I was so choked up during most of the story because it was so heart warming and, at times, heart breaking.

I was close to having a heart attack when Quinn first left and then I think I actually had one when Dante said the duchy stuff and then another one when Dante saved Quinn from John. 

It was sickly romantic when Dante dropped everything to move to England with Quinn but I can't say I didn't love it. 

At the end when we found out they had adopted Angelo, I can't say I didn't see it coming at least a little and I would have been disappointed if it were any other way. 

How do you come up with your story ideas? They're pure gold! I'm so jealous. I seriously can't wait for more from you! You are, by far, one of my favorite writers of all time.  
 

lovely story!

oKay It is rare for me to cry while reading a love story but this got to me, amazing job.

d'aww
the ending was adorable :]
i loved this

:D
i'm working my way through this and i just noticed that chapter six had a little codding problem
the end of it isn't typed right
just wanted to let you know :]

I'm going to miss these guys :)
I love this story so much, I'm really glad they adopted Angelo <3
And it's so sweet, the whole story.

Actually,
I'm a lot happier that they adopted Angelo ^_____^
<33333

I'm so sad to see this go.
Butttttttttttt,
off to the oneshot! :D
<3

THis story was absolutely fantastic <3 I just read all of it and I can honestly say it's one of my favorite stories here on mibba. You're an amazing writer and I'm glad I found this story :)

And by the way, I don't think anyone can imagine how much I squealed when I read that they adopted Angelo :D

OMGGGGGGGGGGG!
It's over =(

but it was an excellent story! Can't wait until I can make it into a movie... ten years from now, but still! That means there'll be excellent graphics and hot guys for Dante ;)

On to the sequel!

I'm crying.
Sweetest ending ever.
Little Angelo...
AWH.
I absolutely adore this story and I am so glad that I read it!
Thank you so much for writing it <3

Awwuh! The ending was so cute. I'm sad to see it end, but the ending was quite good. :)

Last chapter...
I am honestly going to bawl when you post it.
Like, hardcore crying, no joke.
Just a warning (:
And, whatever chapter you want! O:
I think the one where Quinn came back and overheard Dante talking would be interesting though. There's a lot of emotions to play off of in that one.

Omg!!! Really loooooooooooooooooong chapter dude. xD loved it tho! I cant believe it's almost over! :( oh well! Its an amazing story!

P.S. The chapter where they first see each other

you should do the chapter where quinn when to venice and overheard dante talking

-presses lips into a firm line-
I think that they should adopt Angelo when they get married.
I'm just saying.
...

And,
I wantttttttttttttt...
the last chapter to be done in Dante's pov. ^_^

I loved this chapter.
It was sweet and wonderful.
I think you should write chapter 16 in Dante's POV.
I just want to know what's going through his mind.
:)
Such a great writer, you are.