Polar Bears - Comments

I like it.
^.^
I remember a joke just like this.. minus the "Hi my name is ____."

This story is so cute, love it. glad the layout worked out ok, let me know if you'd like me to fix anything!

Haha, that was good, made me smile. =D

The pick-up line seriously cracked me up. It was written well, some dialouge felt forced upon the characters though. And in a sense, it was also a bit mediocre to me, probably because most of this story was dialouge instead of actual insight from the man. You could've dragged it out a lot more and got into detail about his surroundings, how the girl looked, and more observations like that. But overall, it gave me a good laugh.

Lol, guys are so smooth sometimes. xD
This was pretty good.

Haha, I like this. It made me smile.
Overall it was very cute.
I think she's lying, though... XD I like how you left that ambiguous.
You used the pick-up line well, and I couldn't see really any mistakes with spelling or grammar or anything like that.

i like it!