I haven't watched or read Host Club in a while but I think your story is really cute and your characters are portrayed much like in the anime/manga. Your layout is cute and easy to take in and I like how you use just the right mixture of detail and dialogue. I find that lots of authors often use too much of one or the other. *cough* tolkien *cough*
I haven't watched or read Host Club in a while but I think your story is really cute and your characters are portrayed much like in the anime/manga. Your layout is cute and easy to take in and I like how you use just the right mixture of detail and dialogue. I find that lots of authors often use too much of one or the other. *cough* tolkien *cough*
I'm a massive anime fan! But unfortunately I've never seen Host Club. I actually studied Japanese in school and once upon a time I had my own pen pal, but that was years ago!
I'll start with the layout. It's quite cute, and I think the simplicity suits a Japanese anime! :)
As I said, I haven't see Host Club before, but I'm guessing it's one of those crazy anime's with overboard characters! If this is the case, you have done a great job in keeping the story hectic! The only bad thing about a hectic story though, is that it can often seem like too much. It's not necessarily something you can control, I suppose, since the show has so many characters. It just seems like there is alot of dialogue.
There were a few spelling errors that I found, but all in all it was an easy read and I really enjoyed it! Call me bias coz I'm an anime lover!
AHHH!!! you cant just leave us hanging like that!!!!!!! i need more!! like now! this is the best OHS:HC fic ive read... well its only the 3rd one ive read but its the BEST!! are you gonna contain any spoilers of the manga series?? cause ive only seen the anime series and its only Season 1 ): anywho just wanted to say LOOOOVE your story UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE!!!!!!!