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This was amazing, it was so poetic. Just beautiful and so true. I love how honest this is, you have such a amazing talent. Very, very good work.

I hate to sound repetitive, but this was a really honest drabble. I like how when I read it, I could instantly tell that it was the truth with no lies to it. I only had one problem with this drabble. In the first four lines, I think it will be better if the commas were semi-colons. I feel that they would have more of an effect when reading it.

This was a wonderful drabble.

I adore this dribble.--I know it's spelled different my autospell is a bitch sometimes. ANY WHO.

The repetition of desperation is really just beautiful--the emphasis on it really just brings the story together and shows just how much he or she wants to fit in. I really love the way you were able to describe how...unworthy they felt? If that makes sense. It just was beautiful and felt really...raw. Also the second person really brought it together nicely. XD

I love the fact that I've never read a drabble quite like this. You had a great choice of words throughout the entire story, and it's obvious that you're a fantastic writer. It left me curious, which is always a good thing. I loved it!

Oh, I love this. It was...so rough, so mean...so not the usual emotion for this type of drabble. And that makes this so differently powerful, it's incredible. I really like this style, where it's a poem that tells a story :)
Great job, and awesome banner; tied in perfectly to the story.

I liked how brutal this was. Like how it was said with venom. x)
Like said above, it was very to the point and this was very well done.
Lovely drabble. :3 <3

I really like that you got it at exactly one hundred. Too many people on here seem incapable of write a drabble that is one hundred words in length. So pat yourself on the back.
:)

Bloody hell, this was . . . incredible! I don’t think I’ve read anything like this. What you’ve written is different, unique and powerful. There is so much hidden behind the words and emotion. It almost feels angry and disappointed maybe.

I’ve read drabbles that were honest, but never so brutally honest, you know. It was perfect, the way you wrote it out flatly and easily. In addition to your honesty you were short, sweet and to the point. Nothing could have made this better.

I agree with Bipolar Halo, it is a vicious circle. A vicious, never-ending, circle.

It flowed so smoothly I was amazed and your choice or words was perfect.

Good luck!

I loved the way you started this, it really pulled me in. And I thought it was quite relatable and something everyone should read. This was short, but really enjoyable.
Great job. <3

Shortly divine! Each word was just bunched up with so many different emotions; probably what everyone is feeling some point in their lives. This is the exact example of people and the weird way they only seem to see the negativity in their lives. Just amazing.

That was really good. It almost read like a song.

I thought that you captured the emotions of the story very well. The desperation, the depression, everything was just so bold. You could really feel everything.

I really liked it. For something so short, it held a lot.

Great job!

The last line, is what drew me in. It's so relatable, because most of us do try to make everybody happy, but we don't exactly realize what effect it's having on us.

Oh my gosh, I loved this.
I don't even know what to say.
It was so true and amazing.
There was a bunch of emotion for the short amount of words.
Gah! So good <3

I'm in agreeance with Bipolar Halo and her comment.
This is a good drabble it's brutally honest one.
You portrayed a lot of emotion in this.
The last time was my personal favourite though.
I also really loved the layout.
Especially the picture.

Damn, this is utterly perfect.
Your works are masterpieces.
All of your simple little sentences are so powerful, I can relate to them so much.
And the subject of this was... you portrayed the emotion brilliantly through your poetic language.

"Give your best; it will never be enough."

Gah.
I get this. -.- I really do - that may be why I love and hate it.
We all feel like this, at some point or another.
Just like we aren't good enough for anyone.
I've been there - don't plan on going back.
Amazing work. (:

I love this!
It's so true and honest and amazing. It's so full of emotion.
Well done (:

This was amazing. It was so honest and raw. It was short, sweet, and deep - I love that. (:
Wonderful job! (:

Ajkjksdjs! o:

I'm like sitting here, stunned speechless, missypants. This was so raw feeling and so detailed even though there were only a few short lines.

And I pretty much agree with all of Bipolar Halo's comment.

Amazing. :)

This was somewhat like a poem. It was...true y'know. Best drabble I've read.

Damn! This is one brutally honest Drabble. I enjoyed it. No matter what in life, someone will be unsatisfied, and you'll be unsatisfied. It a vicious cycle of unsatified desires, goals, feelings.

Very well written. Short sweet and to the point.