Violent Dreams. - Comments

I love it!!! I love the description and my favorite line out of it is "sitting on my shoulder and hissing resent into my ears" I'm definitely going to read more of your work ^_^

So I've never got into Supernatural. I didn't think it was interesting at all, but my opinion about that has changed completely. You captured Deans' torment about that nightmare perfectly; I felt like I was in it. It was so terrifying to read! D: It was beautifully written too. I vaguely remember reading about Dam and Dean being brothers and seeing Sam like that is just plain creepy. o.o He seems like a great character and Dean. Poor Dean. He seems to scared. Rightfully so, too! Thank God it was a nightmare and not real. I think I'd die D:
Anyways, you've done a lovely job here. I'm shocked that this doesn't have about a million comments, haha!
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Wow. Just wow. You really captured Dean's torment perfectly . The nightmare is what I'd imagine he would be dreaming and more. Very descriptive and intense to read. It's been a while since I read anyhting SPN, and I enjoyed htis very much.

and also, sorry for not reviewing soon enough work and now school has taking up much of my time >_O

I look forwrad to reading for from you :D

It took me some time to read this, but it was worth it.

Your descriptions are so realistic, I kept having goosebumps while reading. I loved how you set the story to beginning, you threw the readers immediately to the action.

I've never watched Supernatural, but you made me want to watch it now. The way you wrote everything is just amazing, the dream and the different settings, different faces. I felt the guilt that Dean was feeling throughout the whole thing.

And I agree with what Ice Queen said, this is the best dream sequence story I've ever read. The fast-paced narration and the different settings work perfectly to induce the reader into a state of alert and fear. And the whole thing has some sort of Apocalyptic note to it, which just makes it even more intense to read.

And the ending, holly mother effin hell. That was such an amazing ending. You left me at the verge of my seat, wanting to read more.

Regarding some typos and grammar mistakes, I noticed a few that could be easily fix in order to improve the amazing flow that your story has:
make me tree house - here, I think it'd work better if it said make me a tree house.

my throat burns almost as if bleach has been poured down my throat. - The repetition of throat threw me off a little; perhaps looking for a different choice of words in order to not making it look redundant.

surprised at how in tact it looks - in tact doesn't have any spacing; it should be intact.

it’s in it’s condition of when it was home to Bobby - The second it's should be its.

Aside from those little typos, your story was just wonderful to read. Fixing those will improve the already amazing flow your narration has.

This has to be the best dream sequence fic that I've read. Despite the quick changing of scenery and events, nothing felt rushed or confusing, and the order of all the pieces of the dream flowed together wonderfully. The imagery is tragic and beautiful, and very haunting, which I always love. And it seems just like the type of dream that Dean would actually have, you've channeled his emotions expertly into this story. It's the type of story that will keep me thinking about it after I've read it, and I think those images you created are going to be running through my head for a while. Amazing job!

Oh.My.God.

That was geniunely amazing. It felt as if i was there.It was written extremely well. Better than how i write for sure.

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First of all, Supernatural-themed FTW
And you are seriously talented, m' lady. Your descriptions are so unqiue and the imagery was just amazing, especially in the first couple paragraphs because you went into detail with the bricks mocking him and such. The first sentence really drew me in immensely and it became really interesting to read as the story continued, and I particularly loved one sentence from the beginning. My heartbeat is thudding in my ears, the noise is over powering although I can still hear the cackle of the fire ripping apart my family. I don't know why, but it was just really great. The title already gave me an idea of what I was going to be reading and it was nice to be given the idea. Some parts honestly sounded a tad awkwardly worded, but other then that, I really enjoyed it.

I really like the way this is written.
Your descriptions were wonderful.
This was a really good piece.

Miss Vivian Lighthouse, I adore this a great deal. Like, you have no idea how much. I've sat here and read it twice already and I'm sure more will follow. It's truly brilliant, as is most of your stuff, and as always - I love it.

I'm not sure why but i really really really like this line:
It’s almost as if it never had the touch of my childhood, just the damage of my maturity.