A really nice story. The plot was fabulous, it could have easily been a cliche, but it was pulled off rather naturally, a hard feet to do, so congrats on that.
My favourite line?Insain Times Call For Insain Measures The impact on the story? SICK AND SAIN -teenie moment-
I apologise for my lack of constructive criticism, but there is not much to criticise about this fabulous story. Update soon. One things ferr surre. I'm subscribing.
Okay, so you know what the weirdest part of this is? BJ's moving soon, close, but he's still moving...Ryry better move in or I'm suing you.
*snorts*
Morphing into Brendon was possibly the funniest, randomest thing to happen. Because just like Mylee if Ryan Ross was a bastard to me, I'd probably fuck him in the closet within two minutes...We all know it's just foreplay, girlies. He's in love with me/Mylee/Brendon...
I loved it! [You have no idea. I was so worried I was gonna get something shittty, but then I saw YOU wrote it, and I don't know your writing that well, but I'm not stupid.]