Medusa's Eye - Comments

Serves that bastard right......
Wanting to kill his own son.....after already having killed his wife....
It nearly seems like Maximus is actually feeling some kind of remorse....
Psh.......scratch that, he's just scared for his own life
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was definitely exciting, and was that remorse Maximus was feeling GOSH!!!!!!!! :O hahaha no but seriously I loved the update, it was amazing :D can't wait for the next one hmm, so it is true what they say... Your life does flash before your eyes before you die, a-fucking-mazing :D

can't wait for the next update :D BYEE!!!!!

I like it soooo much Plase update soon

OMFU THAT IS BAD A**!!!! LOVE IT!!! cAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

Oh my fucking god
That chapter was so damn intense
Tsk, Maximus is such a fucking pervert
And a fucking bastard on top of that
He wants to kill Matt.....
But I guess that Maximus won't care any longer about it, as he'll probably be dead
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

Omygee this is amazing and different. I can't wait til the next chapter is up going now to subscribe :)

Wow.
This one was even more intriguing than the first one.
I'm really really excited to read more of this. :D
But seriously kill Mattie?
I didn't see that coming at all.
Update soon, yeah?

that was an intense second chapter, seriously I mean WOW. It was definitely one of those chapters that keeps you on the edge of whatever you're sitting on :D LOL I loved it, update soon because I am impatient tehehe I'll try and comment every chapter as long as you don't update too often :D haha kidding although I will attempt to comment every chapter even if it is brief :D

i really love this :)

sounds good so far

Awesome story!!! Can't wait for more!!!

I love this, The story theme is original, and it's the first i've seen of its kind! You probably are going to start a new writing trend with this! :D.

Wow.
This is fucking amazing.
I can't believe...its just wow.
I really love this.
I can't wait to read more. :)

This is a really amazing idea for a story
Can't really wait for more
Just a small thought from me, the German parts in it are sometimes not translated the right way. I know that you used Google translator, but 1) when Zeus is talking to Kira, in the german sentences he's talking to her as if she was an adult. He's talking really formal with her. 2) And some parts just aren't right. I know that it's not your fault, but the Goggle translator one's. If you need some help with the translationg sometimes, just ask me. German is my native language
I'm really looking forward for more
Hope you update soon :)

I love it so far :D I would be criticizing but honestly I don't know what to say, it's great I loved the first chapter and don't want to wait for the next :D