Leaving Lies - Comments

And the plot thickens. haha. So Danielle hunts him down because she's obsessed with him. That's not normal for her. I wonder who's going to be playing who. I mean, yes, Nick seems all worried and sincere and crap but I distrust those type of boys who will do ANYTHING to keep their secret. That means they have a dangerous secret to keep. I wonder whom will be changing who, Danielle or Nick? I have my theories, but then again its me and I always do. haha.

Awesome chapter!! Update again soon!! :)

i dont really understand whats going on. could you explain it?

So...Joe. Yeah....he's got me feeling a little sad for him. I mean, he is feeling the pressure of stardom and all that the media puts on him to be pure and whatnot, but then he also has to deal with his brothers' popularity as well. I mean getting turned down by a girl who went after his own brother is harsh. I don't think that gives him the excuse to go after Beth. I can see he has a fascination with her but I'm not all too sold on the fact that she's as nice as she's making it out to seem. I think she's too stuck up in her own self. I mean she wasn't all that concerned about the breaking condom, but I think its weird that they only break when he's with her. Hmmm. Something to ponder there. Maybe they all just need a solid companion. I think Kevin is the closest one to getting it out of the three of them. Haha. (Go me!)

Overall I really liked the chapter and I'm sorry its taken me this long to comment on it. It probably seems a little all over the place and that's because my head feels like its gonna explode. So much pressure in it tonight, and yes I did take medicine finally. lol. Can't wait for the next update!

I feel kind of bad for everyone in this story. Lol. I like it so far though. Looking forward to the next update.

can't.even.omg
THIS IS SO GOOD
great update(:
I hope Nick's there when she gets up!<3

Tsk tsk tsk. Look at naughty little Nick. haha. Sleeping with a random girl. Though she seems nice. That seems to be the emerging trend here among those boys. First Kevin and then Nick....Is Joe next? lol! He seemed very hurt by Danielle's quick rejection of him because of his reputation. i almost felt sorry for him. :P You've still got me intrigued. i can't wait to see what happens next. New character added and lots more layers added to the brothers...well at least two of them. Can't wait for more!

Update soon!!

Awesomely fantastic!!! :D

You really nailed the emotions! I feel sorry for myself. I mean why the hell I stay with a girlfriend beater I don't know. Guess the whole love thing makes sense. But Kevin is way better than my scum of a boyfriend. It was sweet that he stayed with me after sex. That's always a good sign. I like that Kevin is so nice. I wouldnt' want him any other way. :) I just hope he isnt' like his brothers and just playing me. I would not like that at all. I'd have to do something drastic. But I have a feeling Kevin wouldn't do that to me, yeah? Okay good. :)

Loved the chapter!! Update soon!!

This is really good! I hope you update again soon!

Wow okay so you even have me confused now. I seriously don't know what to think. I know a little more than other people but damn my head is spinning. I feel for Joe with the whole broken condom thing. That could turn out to be really bad. I hope not though. I mean what are the odds? Well...he is a special guy so....haha!!

I really need you to give more light to this! Please bring me out of the dark just a little! This is really good if I'm begging you here. I need to know what happens!! hehe. Update soon!

Ooooh! This is fantastic; cannot wait for the next one!

interresting, cant wait to read more...

Omg! This is an awesome start! You didn't drop his name though. :( Which Jonas boy is it? I know the article said it was Joe, but was it? Would he really be that pleased to have his rep like that? I'm not totally sure about that. All we know is it isn't Frankie...and that's a good thing! lol! That would be a little scary there. haha!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter where you'll tell us the identity of mystery Jonas bar guy, yeah?? :D Pretty please? :D:D Update soon!

Sounds very cool! I know you'll do great with this story idea :D I can't wait to see what happens. You never know with them Jonas boys as bad boys :P I look forward to it!!

this sounds interesting, danielle. i always love reading about them as bad boys HAHA.