May 23rd, 2014 at 04:43am
Drip. Drip. - Comments
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i thought i was gona cry too and when i got to the part where she was slashing herself i was like "holy shit!!" that was a really good short story great job!!!!July 25th, 2010 at 04:24pm
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Really good.
Made me cry.July 22nd, 2010 at 07:30am -
I think it fit your prompt well, very dramatic. Besides the few mistakes I thought it was really good :)July 21st, 2010 at 09:55am
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When I saw this, I thought it was going to be a story about self-harm, but about a girl wanting to kill herself because of teen pregnancy?! SLAP IN THE FACE! I really like how it ended so abruptly. Easy to read and follow. Great job!July 21st, 2010 at 09:39am
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This made me laugh.
Which is what was suposed to happen.
Drama drama drama.
You did a great job on following the prompt!
I like how it ended with "she was dead", nice.
There were a few mistakes, but thats not a big deal.
The layout was fitting too. It was easy to read and fit the tone of the drabble.
Your score was 85/100
Good job!July 20th, 2010 at 11:24pm -
Other than a few grammar and spelling mistakes, this was quite good.
:)July 20th, 2010 at 09:35pm
That was so dramatizing it's awesome!