i thought i was gona cry too and when i got to the part where she was slashing herself i was like "holy shit!!" that was a really good short story great job!!!!
When I saw this, I thought it was going to be a story about self-harm, but about a girl wanting to kill herself because of teen pregnancy?! SLAP IN THE FACE! I really like how it ended so abruptly. Easy to read and follow. Great job!
This made me laugh. Which is what was suposed to happen. Drama drama drama. You did a great job on following the prompt! I like how it ended with "she was dead", nice. There were a few mistakes, but thats not a big deal. The layout was fitting too. It was easy to read and fit the tone of the drabble.
That was so dramatizing it's awesome!