The Taste of You Inside My Mouth Remains - Comments

calousedheart (100)

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i fucking love this story! there is not too many Jay stories which sucks since Jay is my favorite!! But I love this story very sweet. Please update soon!!!

May 10th, 2013 at 07:43am

Rev. Micki Plague (100)

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I have been waiting soooo long for you to update this again! It's amazing, I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next :) Pretty please don't leave it so long this time :D

December 4th, 2012 at 01:00am

Call The Angels (100)

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Oh this story does not have nearly the amount of comments it deserves.
I'm really enjoying it. I've had such a hard time finding any good Bullet stories to read, then I stumbled upon this one.
Thank goodness.
It's so well written, and the characterization of Jay is adorable, but still with a bit of a dirty edge to him. Just perfect.
Unfortunately it doesn't look like you've updated in a very long while. :( I hope you do soon, I'd very much enjoy to read more.

December 2nd, 2012 at 11:07pm

XxAwkward.SilencexX (100)

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I do indeedhate the retail world -sung to the tune of house party- EVERYBODY SAY FUCK YOUR RETAIL!

October 23rd, 2010 at 09:52pm

nolongerhere (100)

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I love this! You should def. update more!

September 19th, 2010 at 01:15am

Rev. Micki Plague (100)

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This is awesome :) I loves it :))
More people should write about Jay, hes amazing :DD
Im thinking of starting a story about him but i need to think of a good idea first :L
Update soon please?? :)

September 11th, 2010 at 01:27am

gidget8513 (100)

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I am really liking this story! Poor Jay seems to be the forgotten member of Bullet. Like Johnny Christ is for A7X. haha
Also, being a lame, no accent having, american, I love reading the things you have Jay say, and hear it in my head with that awesome accent he has. :)
The last chapter was my favorite so far, when all the guys were sitting with Ada and talking. cracks me up. haha

September 4th, 2010 at 02:04am

xxamxx (100)

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I like this story so far...just like I like the majority of your stories. You have a really well thought out plot that you never stray from and I really like that you can write a story and balance as many characters as you do. Your stories are actually a breath of fresh air...

September 2nd, 2010 at 07:22am