i fucking love this story! there is not too many Jay stories which sucks since Jay is my favorite!! But I love this story very sweet. Please update soon!!!
I have been waiting soooo long for you to update this again! It's amazing, I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next :) Pretty please don't leave it so long this time :D
Oh this story does not have nearly the amount of comments it deserves. I'm really enjoying it. I've had such a hard time finding any good Bullet stories to read, then I stumbled upon this one. Thank goodness. It's so well written, and the characterization of Jay is adorable, but still with a bit of a dirty edge to him. Just perfect. Unfortunately it doesn't look like you've updated in a very long while. :( I hope you do soon, I'd very much enjoy to read more.
This is awesome :) I loves it :)) More people should write about Jay, hes amazing :DD Im thinking of starting a story about him but i need to think of a good idea first :L Update soon please?? :)
I am really liking this story! Poor Jay seems to be the forgotten member of Bullet. Like Johnny Christ is for A7X. haha Also, being a lame, no accent having, american, I love reading the things you have Jay say, and hear it in my head with that awesome accent he has. :) The last chapter was my favorite so far, when all the guys were sitting with Ada and talking. cracks me up. haha
I like this story so far...just like I like the majority of your stories. You have a really well thought out plot that you never stray from and I really like that you can write a story and balance as many characters as you do. Your stories are actually a breath of fresh air...