The Taste of You Inside My Mouth Remains - Comments

  • calousedheart

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    i fucking love this story! there is not too many Jay stories which sucks since Jay is my favorite!! But I love this story very sweet. Please update soon!!!
    May 10th, 2013 at 07:43am
  • Rev. Micki Plague

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    I have been waiting soooo long for you to update this again! It's amazing, I love it! I can't wait to read what happens next :) Pretty please don't leave it so long this time :D
    December 4th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • Call The Angels

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    Oh this story does not have nearly the amount of comments it deserves.
    I'm really enjoying it. I've had such a hard time finding any good Bullet stories to read, then I stumbled upon this one.
    Thank goodness.
    It's so well written, and the characterization of Jay is adorable, but still with a bit of a dirty edge to him. Just perfect.
    Unfortunately it doesn't look like you've updated in a very long while. :( I hope you do soon, I'd very much enjoy to read more.
    December 2nd, 2012 at 11:07pm
  • XxAwkward.SilencexX

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    I do indeedhate the retail world -sung to the tune of house party- EVERYBODY SAY FUCK YOUR RETAIL!
    October 23rd, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • nolongerhere

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    I love this! You should def. update more!
    September 19th, 2010 at 01:15am
  • Rev. Micki Plague

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    This is awesome :) I loves it :))
    More people should write about Jay, hes amazing :DD
    Im thinking of starting a story about him but i need to think of a good idea first :L
    Update soon please?? :)
    September 11th, 2010 at 01:27am
  • gidget8513

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    I am really liking this story! Poor Jay seems to be the forgotten member of Bullet. Like Johnny Christ is for A7X. haha
    Also, being a lame, no accent having, american, I love reading the things you have Jay say, and hear it in my head with that awesome accent he has. :)
    The last chapter was my favorite so far, when all the guys were sitting with Ada and talking. cracks me up. haha
    September 4th, 2010 at 02:04am
  • xxamxx

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    I like this story so far...just like I like the majority of your stories. You have a really well thought out plot that you never stray from and I really like that you can write a story and balance as many characters as you do. Your stories are actually a breath of fresh air...
    September 2nd, 2010 at 07:22am
  • Brutal-Ley

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    I fucking love this story.
    September 2nd, 2010 at 04:34am
  • XxAwkward.SilencexX

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    Hiii...btw the picture in the top left corner of the banner is my favorite of him haha so cute:)
    August 20th, 2010 at 10:01pm
  • XxAwkward.SilencexX

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    Boom BOOM BoOm bOOm I want you in mah room. To spend the night together, from now until forever....*Hums*
    July 26th, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • XxAwkward.SilencexX

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    You already know:)
    These story make Ada a not so dull girl:P...i don't need to watch The Shining anymore haha
    July 21st, 2010 at 06:58am