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  • guardian324

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    very sad & the storyline is very powerful. enough 2 make anybody burst in2 tears. i love it alot
    May 24th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • Xxpyro_girlxX

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    Sorry it took me so long to finally get to this, I've been extremely busy. I do like your story, even though I did see a few mistakes here and there. At first I wasn't sure exactly how it pertained to fear but by the end I understood. I really felt bad for the girl and it is a very nice technique to get your audience emotionally attached in some way, I'll post the results of the contest after I finish reading the others. Nice job =)
    December 29th, 2010 at 08:24pm
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