Te Amo - Comments

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love it - your writing is awesome :):) Update soon dude

This is awesome. It's such a page turner or scroll downer :) It is amazing :) I can't wait for the next couple of chapters :D

YESSS! I absolutely love your writing style. And after all the comments you've given me, I shall leave you a monstrous comment. You have a beautiful writing voice that insantly grabbed my attention, you have a great sense of detailing and imagery. You already presented your main character with her own personality right off the bat. You show background knowledge, like, you're not just pulling shit out of your ass (if you are, I give you props cuz you sound like you know what you're talking about haha). I have a huge pet peeve when it comes to grammar, but I couldn't pick anything out from your prologue, unless I'm really tired and can concentrate- which I highly doubt. You let your readers feel as if they are in Dextra's shoes. And you really showed what a jerk that asshole who shall not be named really is. He's the one cheating, yet he's callin her mentally disabled because she's too tired to give a damn! I don't see why you don't write more often! You're so good!!!! You better come out with a chapter soon! I'm glad you chose to make this a story instead of a one shot song thing- whatever people call it lol.

You know I love you :) haha, and thanks for the mention in the authors note <3