December 2nd, 2010 at 09:48pm
Not part of the comment but still important: Have you heard his new song, “Just the Way You Are”? I love his music and his voice. :)
I usually don’t comment on layouts, but I thought that the story page was way too thin. The background and the picture and the colors work really well, though.
From the start, I found two things to be a bit weird. One being that you used his full name, which came off a little formal (I also noticed that you used their first names a lot, instead of using pronouns which I think would have been a bit more natural). The other was that he used the word ‘fag’ for cigarette, which seemed unusual because he’s not British. It just threw me off for a moment.
I thought the story was really cute, especially the end. I’ve been listening to some of his music, and I’d have to agree with you. I definitely think he’d be the type to believe in love at first sight.
I thought it was great. I just wish there were more Bruno stories on here, not just one shots.
Though, I have been thinking hard about starting one (As if I needed any more stories to keep up with! Hahah) But, I can't help it. I've been learning more about him, and seeing more of him, and I just fell madly in love with him. As a serious musician myself(I play drums, guitar, bass, piano, saxophone, and harmonica), I respect and admire him for his talents. As a girl, I swoon over everything else. Hahaha.