Dust From Heaven - Comments

This seems so cool! but be carful with name switching I do that sometimes to so its ok lol :) udate soon! Plz!

I really like this. It's interesting and different. As mentioned in the comments before me, I think you mixed a few names around, but it's cool, we're not all perfect and I got what you were trying to get across to us anyway. So yeah, I really like this and I think you should update soon!

I think you may have accidentally mixed up Teagan and Taryn at the end of this chapter but I figured it out so it was all good. :) Poor Alex :( He seems so sad :(

I really like this a lot :D
In the second chapter, I think you may have switched a couple of names around, which made it confusing for the first time I read it. But once I was able to switch everything around in my head, it made so much sense and it was soooo good!!

like this alot so far!! *subscribes* update again soon??

First Comment! YAY! I'm excited to see where this is going :) Definitely subscribing <3