Oh, Teacher... - Comments

Oh, and I've noticed run-ons. I suppose they fall in the category of "grammar," but I'm just shoving it out there.

Don't feel bad when I say I don't love it.

What an interesting story. You could work on a little grammar, but you're writing's fine. I don't love it, but I don't hate it.

He's having wayyyy to much fun with that

Wow love it! You're an amazing writer!!!
Update?

"Oh no, instead it was the sexy yet perverted Literature teacher that would save the rape for when she was awake." - Love it :) But is it rape? That's the million dollar question ladies and gentlemen.

Unwelcome visitor = sexy teacher

update update update!! pleeease :) thanks lol, you're an awesome writer, by the way :)

updateee. your a really good writerr.

Hes a freaking dirty teacher

And THATS what he meant by practice. ;)
Good book so far. Please update.

Wow that last part really got me hooked im not going to lie lol. This was um good lol keep going i wanna see where this goes. As matter of fact imma check out your other book now ^_^