I've Seen a Million Faces and I've Rocked Them All - Comments

Will do it's just gonna take me a bit to come up with a new original one cause it's on my I phone so

Good Story...I just think you need to use a different layout, or change the writing...It took me Ages to read it lol. x

Again I really liked it! Just one thing that keeps getting me (and don't take this the wrong way! I love the story!) is the grammar occasionally. But other than that I absolutely love the story line!

I really like this story, subscribed and I hope you update soon :D

Screw this I can't wait the next one will be up in a few hours:)

thanx for the comment ill take it on board :)
when i get at least two subs ill put the next one up

Heyy
I have a little piece of advice for you. I like the story line, but the transition between the different parts is a little fast and therefore a little hard to follow. You go from one thing to another and I had to read it twice to understand what you were doing. I don't say this to hurt your feelings, I'm saying it so you can improve your writing skills, because I do like the storyline and such =)
Good luck with it, maybe you would like to read some of my LPS stories (But I don't write a lot of slash)

xx