View From Heaven - Comments

You made me cry, I know the feeling wishing you had time to say goodbye on last time...it's happened to me twice within two months last year, this is beautiful and amazing.
Good luck!

Oh my gosh. That was so sad. I definitely cried a little.
That was really, really good.

omg! that was just amazing!
Brilliant!! Great work!!

I really love this oneshot. It was so touching. I could feel Patrick's emotions because you described them so beautifully. It almost made me cry, which is not an easy thing to do.

GOOD LUCK in the contest. :)

That was touching in a sad way. I liked it. The way Patrick was trying to be a single parent. And that he was trying so hard to cope after she died. I adore the way the story went back in time to show what happened. This was really a great story. Good Luck!

that was gut wrenching and so incredibly sad, especially at the end, when Patrick and Molly cried together. Heartbreaking :(

awesome job

Wow. This was something. I began to have tears in my eyes and then when the flashbacks started I cried. It was so full of emotion and passion and I loved it. For someone who never had the desire to write about Patrick you did an amazing job! I thought that you had a nice flow and I thought that the basis for the story was honestly a great one. You really showed that Patrick loved Sara and that he really cared about Molly and how she was going to be. It was a beautiful story and it was well written! (: You really had me captivated! Best of luck in the contest.

you made me cry. -.-
seriously.
I knew.. like i told you.. 2 paragraphs in that I was going to cry..
for someone who doesn't like sad stories.. you sure write them well.. :p
this was greatly written. the only way I can get emotionally involved in a story is if the writer makes me. and you did.
it sucks that molly had to live without her mom, that neither of them got to say goodbye..
sigh. life isn't fair sometimes as we both know..:/
good luck dood.
this was great :) except for the whole.. sara dying.. :/