Black Sabbath - Comments

Wow. I don't even have words. You are an incredible writer. And talk about a cliffhanger ending! I think I'm going to have trouble sleeping tonight, haha. Although I don't know the characters in real life, the way you wrote the story it didn't matter. Absolutely amazing. It was very well developed and detailed. It flowed very nicely and I was enraptured right till the very end. Excellent work!

I was brought here by the comment swap. I'm not really big on the Avenged Sevenfold fan fictions because they're everywhere and everyone is writing one, but I thought yours was pretty good. The way you write is fantastic because you are very descriptive and it flows easily. That last chapter threw me though.

I don’t usually read band fiction, so this was very different for me. I didn’t know any of the band members, so it was a lot like reading an original fiction for me, but that’s okay! I thought you did a good job writing this!
I really liked the line: "Is it possible to fuck a whole room full of strangers with just your voice?"

Whoa, I have no idea what to make of that! I just read the whole thing, start to finish and I have no idea. Your writing is incredible, but what happened at the end? It seemed like everything was getting better, then all that happened! Something freaky going on that's for sure! Just frustrating that I can't see what it is..... XD

HOLY SHIT!!!! >:] love it

Holy, holy HOLY SHIT....what're you doing to me????

Wowsers.

I'm serious about that exorcist now, dude. *shudders*

Brilliant and terrifying. Wow. Poor Mike, poor Adie, poor Billie. Jesus! Somebody call an exorcist.

I love it :)

Freaky! Oh my God....

HOLY MOTHER OF FUCK!!! i love it :) update soon, please?

I really like this. Billie's going to have the upper hand though o.o

HOLY SHITFUCK I LOVE THIS. :devilishly grins: billie's gonna get his ass kicked >:)

0_0 Holy shit! WTF???

OH. MY. GOD! I Fucking love this man! keep writing :]

Wow. Amazing story so far. I love Mike's voice and the surprise for him was great. Poor Adie, though. WTF??

loved this new chapter:D

Wow...can I just say AGAIN what an amazing author you are?? *shudders* Damn, now I gotta pick this one up too! Which I do gladly and willingly, I might add.
Missed you darlin! send me a PM so we can chat, or maybe drop me a line so we can phone each other.

Wow. That was AMAZING!
I was stuck when I read the first damn sentence.
If that was just a one-shot then god damn, you better write a story because that was phenomenal.

Like xstrychninecity said, not many people can pull Twitch off, but you did a pretty damn good job at it.

Ohhhh my God that was amazing! I've missed you and your writing! You have made Billie Joe dark and twisted and interesting and it's awesome to see you bring out a different side of him to usual. I really hope you continue this! :) x