LMAO!!! DUDE!!! The characters you put in for everyone is PERFECT! I saw jack as the hot kid and i literally said out loud 'of course!' and started laughing! So perfect! more soon please!
You deserve an award. Or like a shrine dedicated to you or something. This is just too hilarious to handle; I am literally crying right now. Can't wait to read the rest! :)
Omg what is this. i cant even handle this without dying of laughter. this rocks. if you need someone to co write or w/e i could cause i know it like the back of my hand