5:45 - Comments

this is really really great (: <3
I loved every aspect of it. The character development and the unraveling of the story is amazing. You my dear have an impeccable choice of words <3

I really liked this. It was very sad, but also really well-written, and original. I liked the dialogue, as it's something that a lot of writers don't bother doing, but it really helps you picture the accent the characters are talking in. I liked the comparisons between Oli and Tom, and how they were different from each other; I thought that helped to develop them both as characters really well. The bit when the mum walked in and thought she saw Oli dead scared me - I had to re-read it a couple of times because I was slightly confused as to what had happened, but that's probably just me. :)

i loved this! it was really depressing but i liked that it was so original :) can't wait til i have time to read more of your stuff! :D

Oh god.
I havent read a one shot of yours in a while, and i think its extremely safe to say that I love your one shots and storys to death. Ohmy isnt this a peice of work. Firstly im gunna point out that im typing this on an itouch (grounded for a long time...) which means to disregard any of my spelling errors. I apologize in advance for those.

Down to business. Suicide season is one of the best songs in there album, if not he best ( in my opinion ) It was really interesting to read a one shot about oliver being depressed about toms death. But it was a really smart thint to do, cause I could really feel all of the emotions going round about in olivera head. Im not going to lie to you, this story had me in hysterics so quick as to halfway into the story. Maybe its cause im a softie, but id just like to think that your writings really touch my heart.

God. How fucking cheesy is this bitch, right?

But seriously. I have dealt with my loved ones going through suicide, and thats why i really loved this.. Other than the fact as so obvious that its brill. When oliver had that sort of flashback thing, to when he was teaching tom how to read time, that was so cute, it only made me bawl harder. If it was me writing these amazing peices of work, i would cry like a baby everytime I wrote something like this.

The staircase part made my heart ache. The lyrics to that song is really amazing. Anyways, thanks for this work od art, and all your other masterpeices. Its a pleasure to read your storys

I stumbled across this after reading a comment you left on another Oli Sykes fic. /creepy.
I'm really glad I decided to read this, it's one of the saddest one-shots I've read in awhile.
I love all the emotion and the way you describe how Oli feels without seriously describing it. (Does that make sense?)
This was emotional and beautiful. One of my favorite pieces on Mibba. <3

this is amazing. :) i found the link via tumblr. but seriously, i can't wait to read more of your writings.