Aw man, I so wanted to be first comment! :( But I get to be third! I love this stori. it has a nice vibe to it. I really do like it. :) All in all I know how you feel. I need a new editor, too.
Cools! first to comment!!! I really like your story. It has a good start and I am looking forward to reading more about Anastasia and Paul! Your words have a nice flow to them so make sure you stick to that :)